Here it is! Finally got around to posting the final installment of the Design Process Project.
I quite enjoyed this project as it really got me thinking about designing within a time limit. Admittedly I didn’t quite have a perfected final outcome, rather a a proposal of what the final piece may be. I spent too much time worrying and not enough time doing, which on occasion can be a problem of mine.
The day consisted of us finishing our final concepts and then walking around leaving anonymous feedback on sheets next to each workstation. I quite like this idea of feedback as everyone gets a chance to look at each others work, and leave constructive criticism without the pressure of preparing a presentation.
Last week was a lot of work, what with having to do the project proposal presentation the day before, I feel that I got some positive experience from it.
These are my final pieces consisting of a layout idea, and a rough mock up of what the final piece may have looked like.
The concept for the cover was the advancement of the prosthetic limb. Originally I had done a marker visual of a pirate with a peg leg as a little joke, but it seemed the concept worked well, with just one minor change of making the peg leg a robotic limb. The idea was to play on irony, and I think it spoke to the target audience of being a literary character of Long John Silver juxtaposed with scientific achievement.
The feedback i recieved from the group was:
- This idea has turned out really nicely, all I would do is put a chrome finish on the leg and change the font. Great idea!
- I like it very much, traditional painting combined with modern technology is great idea
- At one look, I didn’t notice about foot. I think you need to more strong appeal that point, because it is good idea!
- Love the concept-the layout may need some slight shifts but overall, great idea!
- Very good idea!
- Really like the final piece in colour, it’s a really simple piece to understand
- Mix’n'match ^^ nice
- Smart concept just needs polishing
- (post it) Clear idea-well done. Good use of media (collage). Layout could be improved easily (sub-headings don’t work with illustration at the moment-it’s easy to change this!)
- A very credible concept. This stems from effective research and broad idea exploration. I agree with the post-it comments too-sort the typo out!
- Very nice idea, I prefer the coloured image, you can see the leg more easily!
I was very pleased with my feedback, it reiterated a lot of the problems I can have with type and layout sometimes, but gave some helpful advice. As is usual with me the idea is there, I just sometimes have a problem with the execution.


